想申請(qǐng)英國大學(xué)，一篇好的個(gè)人陳述至關(guān)重要，它是你給招生官留學(xué)一個(gè)良好印象的好機(jī)會(huì)，尤其是競(jìng)爭非常激烈的時(shí)候，ps是唯一一種凸顯你的與眾不同的材料，那么，如果才能將PS做到盡善盡美呢?接下來，小編就為大家?guī)砹?strong>去英國攻讀研究生ps寫作的十大誤區(qū)及優(yōu)秀范文示例，希望對(duì)大家有所幫助：

　　PS寫作的十大誤區(qū)

　　1.不要援引別人的話

　　招生官們想聽到的是你的聲音，而不是莎士比亞，愛因斯坦，保羅布里頓，馬丁路德金，大衛(wèi)艾登堡，笛卡爾或者拿破侖。所以，除非援引別人的話確實(shí)能形成你的核心觀點(diǎn)，不然只是在浪費(fèi)字?jǐn)?shù)。

　　很多人都引用了同樣的話，而最糟糕的情況就是這些話都違和地放在了PS開頭。于是招生官忍無可忍地咆哮了：

　　“我不在乎洛克怎么想，我想知道你怎么想!”

　　“我已經(jīng)厭倦看到關(guān)于拳王阿里的引用了。”

　　2、流水賬

　　不要無意義地羅列你看過的書，去過的國家，工作過的地方，擔(dān)任過的職位。首先，這樣的流水賬很無趣，它無法體現(xiàn)出你所做過的事。真正有價(jià)值的是你從這些書、國家、工作中所領(lǐng)悟和學(xué)習(xí)的東西。

　　一個(gè)牙醫(yī)專業(yè)的招生官總結(jié)道：“比起看一份羅列你觀察過的手術(shù)的單子，我絕對(duì)更愿意看你從觀察補(bǔ)牙填料中所學(xué)到的事。”

　　3.被用爛的陳詞濫調(diào)

　　不要用‘from a young age', ‘since I was a child’, ‘I've always been fascinated by', ‘I have a thirst forknowledge', ‘the world we live in today’等等短語…你懂的。這些短語頻繁出現(xiàn)在成百上千份PS里且表現(xiàn)不出什么內(nèi)容。

　　4.用籠統(tǒng)陳述和未經(jīng)證實(shí)的說法來吹捧自己

　　“Igenuinely believe I'm a highly motivated person”或者 “My achievements are vast”。取而代之的應(yīng)該是舉出有具體證據(jù)的詳例。證明你的能力和才華，并不是表面文章。

　　5.慎用”passion“這個(gè)詞

　　“Passion”或“passionate”已經(jīng)被極度濫用了。同上，證明你的熱情，而非只是空談。

　　6、生硬的用詞

　　頻繁使用類似“fuelled my desire”， “I was enthralledby” 或者“that world-renowned author Jane Austen”會(huì)讓人感覺你有點(diǎn)假(或者你貌似過度使用詞典)如果某些表述你在日常交流中不用，那就別用在PS里。假如你錯(cuò)用這些表述情況會(huì)更糟，比如“I was encapsulatedby the bibliography of Tony Blair”或“it was in Year 10 that mylove for chemistry came forth”。

　　7、抄襲謊言或夸夸其談

　　UCAS(英國本科大學(xué)和學(xué)院招生服務(wù)中心)使用高精準(zhǔn)查重軟件，如果你從他處抄襲的話，UCAS會(huì)將這一情況告知你所申請(qǐng)的大學(xué)。在重視學(xué)術(shù)規(guī)范的國外這一情況的后果幾多嚴(yán)重請(qǐng)自行腦補(bǔ)。

　　至于夸夸其談嘛，如果你只是讀了一章節(jié)，別說你讀了一本書——你永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)知道在未來何時(shí)的入學(xué)面試中這一謊言會(huì)被戳穿。如果你沒做過、讀過、或看過，別說你有。

　　8、企圖搞笑

　　在適當(dāng)?shù)那榫诚?，幽默、隨性、古靈精怪的風(fēng)格會(huì)很有效果，但這樣做很冒險(xiǎn)，所以務(wù)必小心。

　　對(duì)于這一問題招生官們?nèi)缡钦f：

　　“企圖搞笑的效果可能極好，或者極壞。”

　　“招生官不一定能有和你一樣的幽默感。

　　“古怪不是賣點(diǎn)。”

　　9、消極的評(píng)論或借口

　　在PS里營銷自己可能很困難，但不要因此就在PS里大談為什么你沒有做成某件事，或?yàn)槭裁茨惴艞壛舜髮W(xué)入學(xué)考試。請(qǐng)務(wù)必專注于表現(xiàn)自己的積極方面。

　　10、無關(guān)的個(gè)人經(jīng)歷

　　在PS里寫自己是羽毛球健將或者參加了某次活動(dòng)之前，先想想寫了這些又能怎樣。寫這些經(jīng)歷能否為你的PS添彩?能否成為招生官給你Offer的強(qiáng)有力理由?如果不能，那就自行略過吧。

　　English Personal Statement英語個(gè)人陳述(PS)范文

　　I have a few strong passions in life; Indie music, Chelsea FC and literature. Since there are no university courses for the former two my decision concerning what to study at university is a simple one. ' The only people for me are the mad ones, the ones mad to live' was once said by Jack Kerouac in his work On The Road; the opportunity to experience living while studying amongst some of the finest literary minds in the country is overwhelmingly exciting for me. Ifeel that for too long I have been confined to my suburban prison where my talent for English Literature is being wasted amongst the desolate, uninspiring confines of Mid Bedfordshire. Moreover, sidestepping the risk of sounding arrogant, I have been told I possess a flair for the subject and my grades would certainly suggest so.

　　The subjects I took for my AS levels were English Literature, History, Government and Politics and Communication Studies. For my A levels I decided to stop taking Communication Studies as I deemed it was best to focus on three subjects. Nevertheless, I believe that all three of these subjects have contributed more understanding to my knowledge of English Literature. History，for example, has aided my ability to pick out key points within text and also contextualise any written work I may be asked to study. Government and Politics has taught me many political philosophies that are evident in literary works, for example in Year 12 we studied the play Translations which is littered with Nationalist and Imperialist viewpoints. Communications Studies revealed to me a whole new dictionary of ideologies I wasn't previously aware of. Another benefit of taking these subjects is that they are all examined by both coursework and timed exams. This means that through hours of practice and familiarisation I have refined my exam techniques.

　　Last year I was also fortunate enough to be selected to participate in a scheme organized by my school and the University of Bedford. It gave us the opportunity to get a glimpse of university life as I attended a number of lectures and achieved 15 points towards a potential degree through coursework I took part in. This was certainly an enlightening experience that will undoubtedly stand me in very good stead for the initial adjustment period that　accompanies the beginning of university life. This year I have been selected to take part in the Advance Extension Award. Not only is this a fantastic boost to my student repertoire but also the course itself should further aid my ability to realize my full potential in the subject.

　　When I achieve the required potential and finish my degree I have ambitions to utilise my skills as writer of some kind, preferably an author or a poet. My literary heroes are Thomas Hardy, John Keats, The Smiths lyricist Morrissey and my personal favourite Oscar Wilde. It is my dream to one day have my name illuminated in history as a writer who has inspired people in the same way these and other writers have inspired me.

　　Lastly, to quote Wilde; 'consistency is the last refuge of the unimaginative'. As a student I am anything but consistent when it comes to the studying of literature. Of course by this I don't mean I can be as equally brilliant as awful, the Dorian Gray within me will tell you I am never awful, what I am articulating is that I bring my own ideas to the subject and do not　simply regurgitate answers that are well documented already. That is not to say that I do not thoroughly research and acknowledge the criticism of the works I study but in my opinion English Literature is an innovative subject where interpretation and creativity should dominate. Studying English Literature at university offers me a chance to showcase my love for literature and flourish. The Smiths had a hit song once called Ask and the chorus goes 'ask me, ask me, ask me.' Please do.

　　Law Personal Statement 法律專業(yè)個(gè)人陳述(PS)范文

　　English, being the most diverse language in the world in terms of vocabulary range and one of the most heavily influenced by other cultures, makes for fascinating study and usage.Drawing influences from Celtic, West Germanic dialects, Latin, Greek and French to name but a few make the English language riveting both in terms of use and etymology. The almost ambiguous way writers can create texts that can evoke completely opposite emotions with the same language. Shakespeare created an initially pitiable character of Macbeth and transformed him into a detestable shell of humanity. Whereas, Bront created Jane Eyre who you genuinely empathised with. The ability to construct these characters and real emotions from words is truly amazing.

　　The ability to express yourself clearly and concisely is important in any course and work of life and my part time work in the garden centre Dobbies has helped develop my communication skills. This involved working with customers often in problematic situations,listening, explaining and solving problems or queries they may have. This also involved working with and around other employees which has developed my team working skills. I have also been given the opportunity to help train a new employee by having them shadow with me,this involved a large amount of communication between myself and the new member of staff as the learning curve is at times rather steep. This too shows the trust my employers have in my competence of work.

　　For years I have played rugby at various levels, from school and club to district. In S2 playing with West of Scotland and winning the Scottish Championship with myself being awarded Man of the Match. The responsibility of playing at a high level has taught me the importance and ability of effective teamwork and when need be the aptitude to exercise confident leadership.

　　I have in recent months, in my spare time began to teach myself British Sign Language through resources from the internet and material from local libraries. This challenges my time keeping as, although, I have a strong willingness to learn but have to balance my learning around other work for school and activities.

　　Slightly over a year ago,18 other pupils and I were involved in an expedition to Peru.This was funded by a year of fundraising, the extra work required greatly developed my determination and resolve to achieve my goals. The charity work completed on our expedition included the construction of a new room for a school in a small village called Cachicatta.This work contributed to my progress of attaining my Millennium Volunteer Silver Award which the voluntary work in Peru has contributed to.

　　Sports, other than rugby, play a large part in my life. I enjoy running recreationally but have previously I have competed at a high level in athletics competing for a Scottish Pentathlon team against England, Ireland, Northern Ireland and Wales. I too enjoy Judo;although relatively new to the sport I find the challenge of learning greatly enjoyable.

　　Music is important to my life, both listening and playing. I play both electric and acoustic guitar both at a fairly moderate level. I too enjoy listening to a wide variety of music and support many artists both local and well established.

　　Journalism personal statement新聞專業(yè)個(gè)人陳述

　　The media's the most powerful entity on earth. An interesting quote from Malcolm X, who also claimed, Without education, you're not going anywhere in this world. I wish to combine these two passions and follow my ambition to become a journalist by continuing my studies into Higher Education. It is well known that power attracts and I, like many others, have become enchanted by the power of the written and spoken word. This fascination has created a deep interest in writing, and Journalism provides the perfect outlet to develop my skills.

　　Ive heard enough about the media industry to realise that experience is everything, and as Sixth Form Reporter on the College committee, I gain regular experience of journalistic writing and meeting deadlines. I have written for the official college Network, which is sent home to parents, and the Student Newspaper.

　　When selecting my A Level subjects, I seemed drawn to essay based courses. I enjoy writing and the courses undoubtedly helped my writing skills. However, I was required to make the opening of a film in Media, which was an experience to say the least! It increased my interest in Broadcast Journalism. Until that moment, I only had eyes for Print. Creative writing has always been one of my favourite aspects of English, and the coursework gave me the chance to write in whichever style I chose, one piece was a newspaper feature on Chelsea Football Club. I have always been interested in Sports Writing and Im considering specialising in it at a later date. I have chosen to continue four of my five AS Levels onto A2, even though it was not necessary. I have always found Psychology quite challenging as it involves deep levels of critical analysis, so I decided to carry on as I find it extremely intriguing. The different theories as to why humans do the things they do, attract me because I am interested in how people act, though one could hardly call me an anthropologist! My main priorities are English, Media and Sociology as I feel they will aid me most in my ambition, although I still find Psychology a fascinating subject.

　　I have often said that nothing is impossible, yet asking me to name my favourite book is asking too much. Some much-loved literature includes The Hobbit, Gone With The Wind, and Jane Eyre. In my opinion a good novel should evoke a variety of emotions from beginning to end. Music may not be my first love, but it is definitely one of my passions; I have high passes in grade 3 flute, singing, and grade 5 piano. Like my literary tastes, my choice of music is eclectic; I like anything from hip-hop to classical, soul to rock, and past to present. I also love Black history, musicals, and icons of film and music, such as Audrey Hepburn, John Lennon, and Sinatra. Lennon once said, We all want to change the world, I empathise with this view and seek to achieve it using my chosen profession and the power of the media.

　　Accounting & Finance personal statement會(huì)計(jì)與金融專業(yè)個(gè)人陳述

　　Since studying Business at GCSE level and Economics at AS level, I have developed an interest in the role of finance within businesses. Alongside my studies at school, I have also taken inspiration from my involvement in my father's part-time business. I have helped deal with some financial aspects of this business, including banking and completing annual accounts, from which I have developed several skills in working with figures and the ability to accurately handle, organise and analyse information. From this experience, I am intrigued to learn more about finance and accounting.

　　Currently, I am studying A levels in Psychology, Geography and English Literature. I chose not to continue Economics to A2 level as the specific aspects of my other courses were much more relevant to my personal interests. Each of these subjects has given me valuable knowledge and understanding which I can apply to many other general areas. Studying Psychology has given me an insight into behaviours and attitudes in everyday involvement with people, both relatives and friends as well as within society in general. The human aspects of my Geography course have provided me with the ability to better understand important issues on a global scale. In studying literature I have learnt to communicate ideas more clearly and confidently, both in speech and in writing.

　　Outside of school, I enjoy reading both fiction books, mostly classic novels, mysteries, science fiction and fantasy, and non-fiction texts, generally including information about natural history and the economy. I read everyday as this is something that I find beneficial to improve my general knowledge and provides me with an opportunity to spend some time on my own. In addition to this, I have an enthusiasm for computing. I am familiar with using spreadsheets, word processors and creative software and I am also learning aspects of web design. In recent years I have learnt skills from my brother, who is a computer programmer, and I am always eager to teach myself new things.

　　As an individual, I have always aspired to higher education at university as I have a positive and committed attitude to learning new things. The idea of moving on from school life and taking on the challenge of a degree course provides me with motivation and determination to succeed. From studying at university, I intend to develop my personal characteristics and skills and learn to apply the knowledge I gain to pursue a career in an accounting or financial profession.

　　綜上所述，以上講的就是關(guān)于去英國攻讀研究生ps寫作的十大誤區(qū)及優(yōu)秀范文示例的相關(guān)問題介紹，希望能給各位赴英留學(xué)的學(xué)子們指點(diǎn)迷津。近年來，赴英留學(xué)一直是廣大學(xué)生最熱門的話題，同時(shí)，很多學(xué)生對(duì)于簽證的辦理、院校的選擇、就業(yè)的前景、學(xué)習(xí)的費(fèi)用等諸多問題困擾不斷，別擔(dān)心，IDP留學(xué)專家可以為你排憂解難，同時(shí)，更多關(guān)于赴英留學(xué)的相關(guān)資訊在等著你，絕對(duì)讓你“瀏覽”忘返。在此，衷心祝愿各位學(xué)子們能夠順利奔赴自己心目中理想的學(xué)校并且學(xué)業(yè)有成!

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