IELTS(雅思考試)三大主辦方之一與英國《泰晤士報高等教育副刊》（Times Higher Education）聯(lián)合發(fā)布世界大學排名

   動人的美國留學個人陳述開頭，最大的好處就是能夠吸引評審教授讀下去的興趣和欲望。那么怎樣才能達到這樣的效果呢?開頭的寫法必須能帶動全文，使文章能夠動的起來，也使文氣能夠延續(xù)下去，對于讀者要能引起動機，使他們有往下看的動力，否則就成為一篇死氣沉沉的文章了。

　　(一)開門見山法――先點出重點，再依據(jù)事件發(fā)生順序，將所見所聞寫出。

　　例如：

　　I was lucky in the fact that I picked chemical engineering and it turned out to be the right choice for me. However, my first semester at college was a rude shock - being away from home for the first time, being in a relatively male-dominated field

　　I started in a test lab for airplanes, where I got to break things. That is called static and fatigue testing. Then I went into design for airplanes. I worked on all areas of commercial planes including the floors and windows. . I am most proud of my testing projects

　　(二)倒敘法

　　例如：

　　On the commencement I was deeply touched by myself. The reason I was so excited was neither the progress on my students’ study nor my excellent graduate thesis award. The only reason that made me in tears was that I am one of the few undergraduate students who attended many researches in the department and got guide on special knowledge and personal growth. During my four years study I established a good relationship with my instructors and classmates. When the leaving day came I was moved by my success and the strived life for all these four years.

　　(三)引用法――美國留學個人陳述開頭引用各種資料，加以引申，達到吸引讀者，幫助突出中心的作用。

　　例如：

　　When asked how to manage to mask remarkable statues, the French sculptor Auguste Rodin answered, “I choose a block of marble and chop off whatever I don''t need.” For me, life is just a block of marble---whether the marble can be turned into a remarkable statue depends on your natural talents, diligence and a sense of duty. During over four years’ my college life, I have been dreaming of being a perfect female researcher so that I can enhance more young girls’ confidence in scientific research and encourage them to promote the development of science as men do.

　　(法國雕塑家羅丹說：“給我一塊大理石，把多余的去掉。”人生就是一塊大理石，而能否雕琢出精湛的藝術(shù)品，演繹出絕妙的人生靠的是天賦，勤奮和使命感。我確立并實踐著一個夢想,在接下來的生涯中我將繼續(xù)我的夢想：to be a perfect engineering girl and display this kind of perfect to all，激勵更多的女性樹立在科研領域有所作為的信心，充分發(fā)揮在科研上的潛能，和男性一起推動科學的發(fā)展!)

　　(四)精辟設喻法――留學ps開頭設喻，以引起讀者對要說明的事物或道理的興趣。

　　例如：

　　“Life is just like the ocean----whatever choice you make as a steersman, you must be well aware of your favorite, namely, which is worthy of pursuing in your whole lifetime!”

　　Since I was admitted into ××× university three years ago, these words, just like a bright lamp, have been lightening my future and leading the way to my favorite career--- the studies of educational technology.

　　(“在茫茫大海中，對于一個舵手最重要的是‘方向’，是在大海中行進時清楚的知道自己何去何從，人生就如同大海，不管你選擇的是什么，作為舵手你必須清楚的知道什么是你的至愛，是值得你一生都去追求的!”

　　三年前當我坐在大海邊冥想之時,母親對我講了上面的話語。這些話語就像是我人生中的一盞燈塔,引領著我一步步的尋找到了我事業(yè)的至愛―教育技術(shù)和追求它的航線。)

　　(五)背景漸入法

　　1、美國留學個人陳述開頭引入家庭背景

　　例如：

　　My father is a chartered accountant and my mother is a banker. During my days at Engineering College I used to go to my father''s office and help him manage his portfolio of equities and other financial instruments. This was the time I learnt the first lesson of finance from my father i.e. risk and return are proportionate. In 1998 when I was in the second year the China stock market crashed. But fortunately, my father had a well-diversified portfolio because of which our returns were protected from the downside risk. This was when I learnt the second principle of finance from my father i.e. diversification reduces risk. While I understood these two principles intuitively, it produced in me a strong urge to learn and understand the complex theory behind the working of Finance. This, I believe, was a turning point in my career. I made up my mind to pursue a career in Finance and hence decided to do a Masters program in Business Administration.

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